1.15.2012

Sunday Scribble.

 



















Sunk

So deep underwater
heart weighted to keep me
lost in you
I hear your muffled sounds, feel
your call from far away
your shape, a trick of light
and I can only hope you see
my siren bubbles
hear their song breaking
your surface, a reminder
that I am here beneath you

-- smh



[sculpture by Jason deCaires Taylor]



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9 comments:

Brian Miller said...

smiles....i could read that a couple ways...lol...and one made me chuckle...un to be so smothered by someone...yeah not fun

Yvonne Osborne said...

Nice. The title and the last line especially.

Unknown said...

I like the power of your poem and the different ways it can be interpreted. Thank you for sharing.

Marti said...

I like it. I haven't been read any Magpies for a while, and this is a good "welcome back." Well done. :)

Trellissimo said...

And there goes another soul crying to be heard...

Tess Kincaid said...

Beautiful...

Helena said...

Nice poem. Nice 'depth' to it indeed!

Susan Anderson said...

This one definitely tells a story.

=)

Helen said...

'heart weighted to keep me lost in you' ... reminded me of a past love - or two!

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