Fear
the mind shrieks
a blunt jab or sharper
stabbing sound
the drag of a knife
across a china plate
smooth edged, waiting
to slice what's there
familiar dread
the idea of how the cut
will feel, bleed
fear
--smh
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When I first saw this photo prompt, I didn't think I'd be able to come up with a thing. But then I recalled a conversation I had with my sister last week while we were playing cards. I had suddenly remembered my grandfather's knife and when I asked, she of course remembered it as well.
I've always been a legendary 'fraidy cat --
At night we would play cards or dominoes and Grandpa would often bring his knife to the table to cut himself a piece of fruit. It was a small paring knife, black handled and cruelly sharp. Well used, he handled it like an old friend. When he would rest it across his plate I had a hard time keeping my eyes off the dark sliver and on my hand -- something about the worn shape of the blade demanded my attention.
Although I never for a moment feared my grandfather,
his knife struck me as just the thing to do something nasty in a scary movie.
(But like I said in the beginning, I was
an easily frightened little thing with a BIG imagination.)
Here's wishing you a
FULL O' FUN,
FROLICKY,
FREE, and
FESTIVE
FRIDAY.
(that has nothing whatsoever to do with fear)
13 comments:
WOW! I could actually 'feel' your wonderful Magpie!
blunt knife across a china plate...can feel that....great magpie...bkm
blunt knife across a china plate...can feel that....great magpie...bkm
Great magpie.
Amazing magpie and loved the personal story as well..thanks for sharing.
I liked your Magpie. I liked it a lot. :)
the knife across the plate gives this an audible texture...then the blood....nicely layered. great magpie!
the drag of a knife
across a china plate
Reading these lines set my teeth on edge, and the whole poem made me tense up. Sharp use of words :)
That scritching on a china plate always makes my uncle salivate...kinda like Pavlov's dogs...heehee!
Oh yes, you can scare me like this anytime!! Terrific mag!
yikes-lke the dragging sound of
bad flatware against bone china..great Magpie!
Terrific sound and soul effects!
Very tense with beautiful feeling (hate that knife on plate sound)!
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