Sunk
So deep underwater
heart weighted to keep me
lost in you
I hear your muffled sounds, feel
your call from far away
your shape, a trick of light
and I can only hope you see
my siren bubbles
hear their song breaking
your surface, a reminder
that I am here beneath you
-- smh
[sculpture by Jason deCaires Taylor]
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9 comments:
smiles....i could read that a couple ways...lol...and one made me chuckle...un to be so smothered by someone...yeah not fun
Nice. The title and the last line especially.
I like the power of your poem and the different ways it can be interpreted. Thank you for sharing.
I like it. I haven't been read any Magpies for a while, and this is a good "welcome back." Well done. :)
And there goes another soul crying to be heard...
Beautiful...
Nice poem. Nice 'depth' to it indeed!
This one definitely tells a story.
=)
'heart weighted to keep me lost in you' ... reminded me of a past love - or two!
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