Goodbye
you go this way, I'll go that
your way, mine
but if -- just if
we keep walking won't we
always come together
this thing that doubles
back on itself, our spiral
slowly unspooled, curling
toward one place
a knot pulled tighter until
there are no loose ends at all
hello
your way, mine
but if -- just if
we keep walking won't we
always come together
this thing that doubles
back on itself, our spiral
slowly unspooled, curling
toward one place
a knot pulled tighter until
there are no loose ends at all
hello
-- smh
How can you not love that photo! Thanks to Tess at Magpie Tales.
Click on the link for more and then -- deep breath -- dare to write your own!
Or just go find someone to really kiss.
Yeah, that's good too....
Happy Sunday!
Happy Sunday!
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17 comments:
Wonderful...you chose to focus on the pose, well done!
You've added movement to this delightful shot.
Love it Susan!
lively and lovely words for this image
Love the image and your words...curling up inside your words :)
Love the way you made this warm and wooly.
I like how your verse starts with a goodbye and ends with a hello. With a spiral in the middle.
I'd go kiss DH right now but he's sleeping off Sunday dinner. Thomas is too fuzzy. Guess I'll wait a while....
A crisply happy read. Nice!
an unexpected take... nice!
JJRod'z
No loose ends at all! This poem is a delight to read...
As clever as it is warm and affectionate. I love it.
I like where you take me with this: A Doris Day/Rock Hudson/James Garner movie with a happy ending!
Rick
kinda like infinity we just loop around each other...really like the line on a knot pulled tight leaving no loose ends...
Love certainly ties us in knots! ♥
Ada makes my toes curl - does that count?
With a prompt like this there is going to be a lot of loving going on this Thanksgiving...
ur spiral
slowly unspooled, curling
toward one place
a knot pulled tighter until
there are no loose ends at all
i like this the best
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