Not a Magpie Tale today,
but a bird of a different sort . . .
My walk was so utterly lovely yesterday, with all the poignancy of a last embrace. And indeed today rain and wind are snatching the last of autumn's splendor off the trees as I type.
As often happens when confronted with beautiful things,
my walk got my word-wheels turning. . .
my walk got my word-wheels turning. . .
and when I came home
I just had to jot some lines
about what I had seen.
There's a sharp divide over birds in my family, with some viewing them as creepy dinosaur leftovers and some who love everything about them, from the birds themselves to bird-as-metaphor. (I fall into the latter camp, in case you are wondering. But I suspect you knew that.)
Anyway, my brief morning encounter with a feathered friend who was also busy soaking up the last sunshine resulted in a poem --
Autumn Cardinal
a crimson flit, fickle
unable to stay it offers
its lovely apology
a sliver of red song
on a quivering yellow perch --
shimmering coins, a curtain
of summer's last currency to spend
laid out against the blue
and counting out their worth
a pivotal contrast, this stark duet
of voice and color reaching
to sing the highest notes
hoping to be heard
above all else, remembered
the tremulous crescendo of a song
that will need to last awhile
-- smh
A little memento of a picture-perfect morning.
I hope you've been able to bask in a bit of autumn beauty in your own neck of the woods, or wherever it finds you.
2 comments:
Maybe the surgeons fine tuned your already extraordinary poetic skills while they had your head in their hands (hmmm creepy thought, sorry). Whatever, your poem pretty much nailed how I felt on my morning walk--without the cardinal. We need cardinals here. I really like the leaf-coin metaphor.
Love the sweet tweet of your blue bird too.
Why thank you, Leenie! Coming from a fine poet such as yourself, I will accept it as high praise. And hooray that you got the leaf/coin thing! It's nice when people get it, because I spend most of my time wondering if anyone does . . .
Post a Comment